My first short clip

Working on a new short animated film. It is very short, 16 seconds currently.
This is the rough animation:

It doesn’t look smooth yet. Need help and suggestions. :slight_smile:

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@EASY Haha, nice short! the ending made me laugh :slightly_smiling_face: Keep going!

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Looks very good. Just finish up with a some in-betweens. Hoping to see the full version.

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Thanks. I hope to finish this one.

Update: July 6, 2018 (Europe: Paris), July 5, 2018 (America: Los Angeles)

Added a few in-betweens and cleared the extra rough part. Next step is cleaning.

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One thing, the action of guy throwing the thing is very linear. Need some anticipation to it similar to the way the dog throws.

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Actually I tried. But I am not able to figure out what should be the correct posture for that. I am trying not to make it too complicated and keep it simple, as I am not that good in drawing. I am still looking up on th net for some references.
And thank you for suggestions. :slight_smile: It means a lot to me.

Final version is ready. I hope you like it :slight_smile:

P.S. Please don’t just watch here. Go to youtube and click on that “like” button. It will really mean a lot to me. And comment too. :sweat_smile:

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A bit ROUGH THIS IS BETTER THEN ANYONE OF MY ANIMATIONS EVER :grin:

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