Is this animation good?


(Phoenix) #1

hey what do you think of my new animation watch it here

please reply and tell me how good it was


(Jose Moreno) #2

Hmm. What i understand is that a car (?) crashes and explodes then a person comes in and someone (something?) else lands on them. If that’s what it is then that’s good, you managed to communicate your idea :+1:

On a technical level, I think the first part is a bit fast so it’s harder to understand for a first time viewer, but the second part has an ok timing and when the element lands on the stickman it triggers a chuckle, so it’s funny.

Thank you for sharing your work :wink:


(Phoenix) #3

Thanks you! i will make more animations i want to be a really good animator and soon work in flash or something like that so im just working in pencil for Now!